Mrs Bryan’s Bright Bunch

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Our Stories

 

 

Stars Wars 3 Revenge of the Sith

 

Once upon a time there were three people and they were called Anakin Skywalker, Obi-wan Kenobi and Padme Amidala. Anakin and obi wan were up in space when they were attacked by a vulture droid. After that Anakin and obi wan went through fire. And into the battle field. The Chancellor Palpatine was trapped in the ship when obi wan and Anakin were coming to kill General Grievous and Count Dooku the clone pilots and clone marines and the clone troopers and clone Assault ship and the x wing fighters and I crashed into the trade federation battle ship and Anakin said to general grievous your smaller than I expected said Anakin Jedi scum said general grievous.

 

By Louis

 

Once there lived a dinosaur with no name. He lived in a brush,. It was a big brush. One-day, the dinosaur with no name was haveing his morning walk when a dragonfly dropped a marball on his head. Then, he had a little fiddle with it. After that, he ate it !!! “Yuck” he said. Next minute the dragonfly came down ina fluster and said in a laid dragonfly voise “you just ate my marball”, “how rude”. “Well firstly, said the dinosaur with no name, you were the one that dropped it and secondly I thort it was a grape”. Then the drangonfly calmed down a little and apoligised that the marball had landed on his head. “In that case” said the dinosaur “I’m sory that I ate it”. The dragonfly and the dino saur disided that they would go an a marball hunt for more marballs.

The End.

 

By Alysha

 

Once upon a time there was a girl named Sophie how loved playing with cat’s. But her mother and father would never let her have one. One day she got a toy cat and played with it every day of that week. In week 1 she forgot about her toy cat and in week 2 and 3 and then in week 4 on Monday it was Sophie’s birthday she un raped all her presents and saved her mother and fathers present for after every body had gone and to her surprise a kitten jumped out and she didn’t scratch or bite and she was just the way Sophie liked it.

The End.

 

By Amy

 

Once upon a time there was a dragonfly the dragonfly didn’t have eny friends but one day a dinosaur came by for no Reason he was going on a school trip a dinosaur school trip but then he sore a lonely dragonfly hello dragonfly do you have eny friends no said dragonfly. Well would you like to be my friend yes I would love to be your friend well I said yes because you are a very nice dinosaur thank you said dinosaur. for saying that hey I have this brush so if we get durty then we can wash are. Self with it and be nice and clean again and then they were real good friends when they got along real well and then they dug a big holl andthen they stoped and looked it’s a crystle maybe we should take care of it and that’s what they did and they lived happely  ever after.

Once open a time there lived a skeleton that lived in a cave far far away.  He lived in a craveyard.  The skeleton was all alone.  So one day he went out of the cave to try and find a friend.  Then out of a corner he saw a bird.  So the bird said to the skeleton I don’t have a friend in the world.  Then the skeleton said you can be my friend.  Com to my place he said cindly.  Then the bird said yes please.  They went to the skeletons place and they aet all of the turkey up.  But there was one at the back that they didn’t reconise.  Then they met a dragon that it was so powerful.

By William and Joshua

 

 

 

Once upon a time there were 2 kids one was named was Toledo and the other name was Heath They always play in the forest  Heath and me were in the forest we were chring [trying] to find or[our] way and we exdly [accidentally] went in the whichs hose [witches house] and we ran a way then we saw a frendlee dragon so Toledo and Heath climed on to the dragons back and floo back to the park

By Heath  and Taledo

 

 

 

Once upon a time ther was a famly and a dog.  And the dog can say what the hoomens [humans] say and the chilchen [children] were going to the playground for the day and to mormmer [tomorrow] they have a birthday for the day of there lives and the dog live and the dog is coming with the famly.  Because they said that dogs are alouto [allowed to] bring there dogs to the birthday because it is a spris birthday.

By Mitchell

 

 

Ther was a monsters in a swamp it smell same moster name sticky head.  He was bad and good. He was good. at maths

other monsters like him

By Declan

 

 

Once there lived 2 girls.  There names are Katie and Tamia.  They live in a beutiful garden.  It had trees and flowers.  They were verry happy with there garden until something verry weird happend.  They had a storm and then they cleaned up.  After that they had a picnic.  It was fun.  THE END!

By Tamia and Katie

The Earthquake

 

 

 

 

 

By Billy & Declan

Once there was an earthquake. Rocks fell from the sky then they turned into crystals. Water flowed through the gap.

 

The ground was hot and orange. The crystals on top of the water was clear like glass. A dinosaur lived there for a million years. He was orange and spikey with a square head and four short legs. He had a big fat nose and a short tail. He had spikey ears.

 

There was a nest among the crystals. The eggs began to hatch…

Story by Rhys Barlass

Once upon  a time there was a man who has a pink van. He is a sales man who sales magnifine glasses to children. One day he drove to the country and in the middle of the road he found a koala. He stoped the car and picked up the koala then took it to the animal hospital. He found out that the koala got hit by a car. The vet doctor had to stich him up with needles so he borrowed the man’s magnifine glass to see his wounded. The koala is getting better so they let him go home.

By Jordan 24.6.09

Once upon a time there was a boy he was 20. And he wonted to have a van he wonted to have a red van. So first he wanted to get his licence. And he got his licence. So now all he had to do is try and find the van he wonted. And just then he saw some footprints. And so he got a magnifine glass to look at it better. And it led to a koala sleeping in a red van. And just then the koala wake up and said you can have this van now. The End.

By Emil

A postvan came down the road and in the postvan it was a builder. And the builder went to a house and on the way there the postvan broke dan and the builder fixed the builders postvan and they got to the house and the tap was broken.

 

 

The Jungle

By Jordan & Amy

Once upon a time there was a jungle and it was very lonly it didn’t have eny. Animal’s but there was just one animal a snake and the snaked didn’t have eny friend’s not even a family. But it did have some fish but the fish caudn’t talk to the snake then one day a little monkey came and never new he bumped into a tree and then he turned around and looked down and he was on a warm brige. Then he looked around him self he first thort it was a rainy forest but it was achley [actually] just a jungle. And he sore some fish but then he got scared because he sore something moving in the trees. Then it was on a log and he got very scared he screemed it it’s a a snake! and the snake said don’t be scared of me I don’t have eny friend’s please be my friend ok said the monkey just don’t eat me please. Ok I won’t eat you just play with me. So the monkey said ok then but do you want to have more friend’s because I can get more friend’s out of my forest. I will go get them very kwikly out of my forest and they lived happily ever after. The End.

The Tea Party

By Alana and Ashleigh

 

One day there were four kids playing in the garden and they got bord playing in the garden so the thanck and thanck until a girl found a ider [idea]. It was a tea party so the girls Ashly and Alana Annabell and Lucy went to the shop to get milk and biskets and then went home and had a tea party and it endid. So the end.

By William

One day in the trees there was a koala. He was going to find a flag eventually the koala found the flag. The End

By Louis & Ethan

Once upon a time there was a train trak and there was a train on the trak and one train was hurt and a break down train was on the way and the driver was here and the engine is damagd hury hury said the drivers and thay livd hpply iver after.

 

By Jasmine 24.6.09

Once upon a time there was a firy called pepsy. She loved to play. One day pepsy and her frends wer plying in a garden Sumeone was also in the garden.

It was Lilly She is a huomon [human].

One day Lilly was gowing for a picnic in the garden. “Mumu I am just gowing to the Lake” said Lilly “OK”! Said Mum.

When Lilly got there she saw a flash. “Hello” said Lilly “Hello” said Pepsy. “Sory I have to go”.

But when evry one was gone Mr yone took photos. The Next Day everyone was hire [here] what are you dowing lets be friends. The End.

By Holly 24.6.09

Once in a Jungle there was a bird. The birds name was pinky. Pinky was verry lonly!

There wer olso & Buttflise. The firs Buttflys nane was pepsy. The second Butfliys name was florers. PinKy met the Butflise and became frends. The end.

By Billy

I knew aMan whitha van. He sold things to people from overseas. one day he came up with a bright idea, to paint his Van and then he found it out it went fast. the end.

Emil

A rere rong a tum there wos a posen wnet a cros a see and the meseh droc duh and the pesen dint hav  chee food and the pipl dint hav sprahs and cas and roses and the trees wer hot there it waos jus dert and prahs and mud and stics and thay went camph and tehd they went hom and weh thay got hom thay went hom to bed and thay jreemd of camp.

 

 

 

The children were really keen to use a story box for homework again this week. The items were a turtle (rainbow coloured), a person in a stripey top and an Australian flag.

The turtle is rainbow and there was a rainbow. There were lovely flowers. by Ashleigh

Once there was a turtle called Turtie. He loved to be a turtle and be green, but he longed to be colourful. Next door there lived a little girl with a striped top. She had rainbow everything! One day when he went back to the sea, he found an Australian flag at the bottom of the sea. When he touched the Australian flag he turned rainbow! by Tamia

The Rainbow

On Australia Day a boy with a striped t shirt was walking along the beach. He found a turtle that had some netting wrapped around his neck. The boy removed the net and the turtle swam away. The boy saw a rainbow that shone over him. by Declan

Once upon a time there was a boy that had a toy turtle. He liked throwing it up in the air. Once he throwed it so high it got stuck in his backyard tree. What shall I do? he said. I’ll ask dad when he comes home from work. When Dad got home he told dad that he lost his turtle. I’ll get him down for you said Dad. The next day dad got the toy turtle with the Australian flag the boy sadi thank you. Thats o.k said dad. by Rhys

Once upon a time there was a boy. He wanted to have a pet turtle but you had to find turtles in the place called turtle place. He didn’t know where it was. So he just went anywhere. And he passed a street called Happy Street so everyone was happy! Then he saw a flag and it was blue and it had a symbol on it. He thought that it might help me to get to turtle place. And he kept following the flags. And it got him there and he got a turtle but the flags didn’t help him! by Jordan

 This weeks task was to write a story using the following stimulii: a coloured ball, a black horse and a blue spider.

As you can see this promted a variety of stories as our imaginations ran wild :)

The Bouncy Crystal

Once there were three crystals and they were bouncy. Then all three came out of the cave. And then a bear came out of the cave and found all three crystals on the ground. Then came a calculator bouncing along to the cave. And the calculator was doing plus sums and he found three crystals on the ground. He then added 3 bouncing crystals + 1 bouncing bear+ 1 bouncy cave which = 5. Then the three bouncy crystals bounced back to bouncy cave with the bouncing bear along with the bouncy calculator. And they all lived bouncing ever after. by Taledo

 

Billy’s soccer ball.

Billy loved to play soccer with his friends. They played against other schools on the weekend. Billy was the striker, Heath and Abe were the goalies. They always won when they used Billy’s soccer ball. by Billy

 

Once upon a time there was a ball, a horse and a spider. One day a horse was going for a walk and she went past a toy shop and in the toy shop was a beachball and she said can I buy that beachball and the lady said yes you can. So the horse bought it and she went home and went outside and played with it then a spider came along so the horse went to the beach and the spider followed but the spider explained that he wanted to be a friend with her so they became friends and they played with the beachball at the beach and they lived happily ever after. The end. By Alana

Once there lived a spider called Long Legs. He wanted to go for a walk to the highest mountain. So…he packed a picnic lunch and a ball and he started his big walk. When he got to the road he ran across it just at the wrong time. CRUNCH! A car ran over one of his front legs! Now let me see, oow, that hurt. What’s that? Over there? Its big aaand black aaand its got four legs. Its, its a horse! He went across to the path. “Hi” said long legs. “My name is Long Legs, what’s yours?” “I’m Moonbeam, nice to meet ya.” “Um, I was wondering” said Long Legs “if I could have a ride to the highest mountain?” “OK” said Moombeam. “Let’s go.” When they got there they had a picnic lunch and played ball…The end. By Tamia

The Spider

Once upon a time there lived a spider. The spider had 6 legs and his name was Freddy. One day he went to the beach. At the beach he met  a horse and a little rainbow bouncy ball. The ball liked playing with Alysha and Harry in the water. The horse liked practicing riding with her owner. When Alysha and Harry were at the beach Alysha and Harry found a cat and the cat wanted Alysha to throw the beach ball to her so Alysha did. BUT! when the cat got to the ball Alysha and Harry ran as fast as they could and quickly packed up their stuff and ran as fast asd they could and quickly jumped onto the ball and said Fyoull that was close. And the spider and his two other friends lived happily ever after. The End, By Alysha

Once upon a time there was a horse and a spider playing with a ball in a field. The spider made a goal from his web. Once the horse kicked the ball so hard it broke the web. The horse said sorry. The spider said thats ok. I’ll build a new web. After the spider made a new web the horse kicked the ball again. The web broke again. THe spider said I’m tired I need to go back to the barn and catch some flies. The horse said I’m hungry and tired too. I need to go back to the barn and eat some hay. by Rhys

The New Soccer Ball

Once upon a  time on a nice Saturday morning me Billy Harry Amy everyone on my team were playing a soccer match at Frank smith Park we were versing Man U with a new soccer ball. We were hoping we would win. When our team was getting the new colourful soccer balls something happened because the horse was stuck in the bag. So we tried and tried to get the horse out then we got the soccer ball out and there was a spider that scared all of us then we ran away. The end by Abe